Finding Home

Finding Home - Jordan Sophia Lombard ***Read as part of the free [b:Don't Read in the Closet: Volume Two|12993786|Don't Read in the Closet Volume Two|Blaine D. Arden||18154040] anthology. Story #18***


This could have been sooooo great! I liked what I could see from the idea (better: what I figure as the idea) behind this story.

It just does not have enough... space within these few pages. Which leaves the story very shallow.

4 stars for what I think was the idea.

2 stars for what I got.

Makes 3 stars all together.