The Present in Room Four

The Present in Room Four - Mandy Beyers
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I don't know...

It started out... OK. Not the best BDSM-PWP I've ever read but acceptable.

But then around the middle the author seemed to decide to add some depth. And it went downhill.

It all was too much a coincidence and the "plot" (though surprising) was solved too easy.

And on a side note: the prompt wasn't hit on the spot.