Chasing the Prick

Chasing the Prick - Adara O’Hare ***Read as part of the free [b:Don't Read in the Closet: Volume Two|12993786|Don't Read in the Closet Volume Two|Blaine D. Arden||18154040] anthology. Story #23***

2.5 stars

There were 2 things that bothered me about this story.

1. It sounds as if herpes causes death. Sure it's annoying to have it but Callan was acting as if he only has 2 months left to live! Especially since the only body area affected is his mouth.

2. Their "relationship" develpoed too fast for me. I mean, they were rivals for 4 years. And it changes within 1 day to friends and finally lovers.
Yes, this is a shorty and so it has to have a faster pace as a full length novel. But here everything happend at once.

I think I would have liked it more if it would have been a full length novella/novel.