***Read as part of the free [b:Don't Read in the Closet: Volume One|12776843|Don't Read in the Closet Volume One|Jade Archer|https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1317574024s/12776843.jpg|17922598] anthology. Story #17***
The story was... ok. Yeah, it had its flaws. But it was still enjoyable... IMO.
The prompt would have needed more space. For a short story it was just to complex. So it's not such a big surprise that the story felt rushed.